We had to write about a short movie and find the climax. We got to rewrite the ending into our own. There are different types of ending including a cliffhanger,warm and fuzzy, moral of the story and many others. I chose to do a warm and fuzzy ending for this piece of writing because it was a sweet story. What I did well is I finished a story. What I could do better is add more detail. What do you like about my writing?
When the puppy was waiting at his feet with the ball. The boy grabbed the ball and threw it by the door. The puppy then chased after the ball tumbling over his 3 feet. When he returned with the ball the boy had a smirk on his face. The boy hopped over into the kitchen and popped the ball. The puppy looked miserable but the boy had no emotion whatsoever. The puppy sat by the door weeping. The boy turned his head and saw it. He then looked at the wall and was thinking about his decision. He called the puppy and as soon as he did the puppy turnt his head. The boy then apologized about what he had done. He then went to the shop and bought a new ball. The puppy was so happy he started jumping up and down.
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